Issue One: Flowery Atomic Heart | |
Page One: 1.1: The Fact, about to throw a bomb. We can make
out little of his appearance. He is outside of any panel boundaries. [Jamil Thomas, however, sent me this very useful cross-reference: "...the k-9 doorway stuff reminded me of that scene in the first issue of the "Sensitive Criminals" arc of The Invisibles, where Papa Skat and Lady Edith are leaving the jazz club. Volume 2, issue 8, page 3, panel 3 : 'My family goes all the way back to the Dogon people in Africa. Six thousand years ago, We opened up the Dog Door to the outside, and let the Nommo in.'" For more on the Dogon, check out the "analysis" section of Tom Coates' The Bomb.] 1.9: Slight change in color seems to indicate a change in state, or a change in perspective.
2.1-2.2: We zoom out further from what was, from a different
optic, a newborn galaxy.
3.1 eggs... Flex is the "egg" from which the grand crossover will emerge? Flex is shown in ludicrous/noble relation to seedy, grungy "reality." 4.1 Is there something performative in the way Flex and the waitress describe one another? Is this a polite exchange? Is it exposition? Is it an attempt to comment on the broadly-drawn types in comics? 4.2-3 Notice the fly buzzing by. We'll see him again in the police office.
Again, the bomb exceeds the panel, as it does on page 1, as it does in issue three, 9.5 and 21.3, etc.
5.5 Notice the red shoe to the far left in this panel. I don't know if it's significant, but considering the emphasis on stuff and debris here, it might be. p.5 "And I realized it wasnt a bomb at all. It was a key " 6 " and it was about to open the strangest door of all." Cut to another scene, one that hearkens more to realism (?). Comics on the table. Notice the "crossover" or layered composition: panels superimposed over a splash page. This is a prevalent compositional structure in the series. 6.2 shows that fly again. 6.3-4 the detrirus and mess is Wally's "fucking life." We are defined by what we own, particularly the throwaway things? What does this say about comic books as "trash," as mere product without much literary weight?
Conspiracy theories: what makes "the debris of a thousand out-of-phase parallel earths" any less plausible than alien abduction? Why do we consider one more ridiculous than the other? (We do, dont we?) The trope of "conspiracy" gives a new power to the implausible. How much of "ridiculousness" is contextual?... More on things collected. "Books and papers" "a drawerful of this crap"
9.1 "Fact" cards are more meaningful debris. The thematic importance of physicality is emphasized here and elsewhere. Comics are physical things, trash and fetish object at once. Comics can also depict physicality in ways that prose cannot. 9.3-4 Comics are the outlines, tracings of a reality 9.5 The reader is Wally Sage p10 our pov shifts: floating above "Wallace Sage". last panel: the "kids comics" level pushes its way to the foreground. 10.1 "? is not what I want". Just like panels can create a visual "bleed" (see McCloud), Morrison creates a textual "bleed." [More on bleeds to come.] p10-11 Flex has been brought from the "comic level" to the "real level." "Reality dies at dawn!" 12.4 doors. Flex sits in a room full of doors. Flex is often framed by doorways in his environment; Flex has gone through the "doorway" from cartoon "textuality" to "reality"...Flex a doorway, as well as an egg? Is Flex the agent of this coming change, or just its witness?
14.3 note position of word balloon. Wally speaks off panel, "above" his walking in front of his house. Time is disrupted. The house reminds me a bit of Morrisons house as depicted in the end of his run on Animal Man. 14.5 Wallace Sage is a secret identity, a creation 15.1 Wally is around the corner from Flex in a moment of crossover. The Unknown Soldier renegade sidekicks. p.17 another shift of representation
p.19 shadows, afterimages p 20-21: The Mighty Sha_a_. "The word that God said: the word that brought the universe and the cosmos into being." p.22: "Children have dreams" p.23. "Its like hallucinations. I dont mind its amazing its like real like another world happening " pov is an aerial view again. Superheroes watching over us
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This annotation copyright © 1999-2000 Jason Craft. Flex Mentallo and all images are copyright © 1996 DC Comics/Vertigo. |